- Metaphor: Valley of ashes, Dr Ecklebergs eyes (consumerism)
- Use of time: It's a Sunday (god's day)- yet affairs and drunkenness take place. how fast time seems to move at the party- end of chapter a key example
- Perspective: this use of time shows us Nick's drunkenness
Section Two:
- Mr Wilson: summation of the Valley of ashes- yet still a figure of hope- "yet handsome man"
- Mrs Wilson: described as "large several times", changes clothes several times, reading material non-intellectual ("Town Tattle" etc)
- Tom Buchanan: "cruel body" finally comes to work, rude to strangers and friends "go by 20 more dogs"
You mention some narrative features but it might be good to highlight them more. Good comments but don't forget to note thematic developments.
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